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Deep in the mid-west, further than a sensible tourist would be willing to go, lay a small town. With a population of near three hundred and a strong Christian faith thread through all of the town's people, Carmarthen was also the only form of establishment in fifteen miles, but nobody celebrate it as an achivement, as there wasn't anything other than a stray chicken or cow for ten miles, and nothing but a place to rest your weary bones for the full fifteen.

It didn't please the occupants of Carmarthen that they were stranded in the middle of nowhere, but they put up with it after hearing about a terrible fight between two rival towns from a cowboy that moved there a little while back, and decided they'd rather be lonely than hated. Not to say that the cowboy who took a shine to the lonely village settled in well with the people there, in fact, most of them would rather have thier peace and quiet back. But the well travelled foreign man was there to stay, so they decided to leave the dust to settle and try to advise their daughters to keep their distance, not saying that the mothers themselves wouldn't smile back at the man when he tipped his hat at them and have quiet conversations about him with their friends, after all, it was hard to say that the boy wasn't handsome or charming, but only in private with their closest pals would the well respected women of Carmarthen talk about a town outcast, otherwise they'd be looked down upon just like the man in question.

The newest edition to the small town goes by the name of Gerard Way, he was of an average build, on the skinny side with surprisingly pale skin for a place where the sun beats down for long hours in the day. His ebony hair was medium length, his eyes seemed a pale hazel but nobody had ever gotten close enough to the lonely stranger to tell. Well presented and very polite to almost all of the people he talked to, it was hard to find a flaw in poor Gerard Way, he only had one attribute that set him apart from the other young men there, his terrible feud with Frank Iero.

Frank seemed like a reasonable, polite boy until his father decided to up and leave the marital home. Ever since then the boy has seemed to close up, loose himself in his head and hang out with the worng crowd. The 'wrong crowd' in question was Jimmy Chivell and his friends, Johnny Milbrooke, Nathan Newbold and Robin Parmall. The boys grew up fine, normal childhoods as far as a neighbor could see, but went off the rails as soon as they turned into teens. It started off small, petty theft, swearing at their mothers, staying out past curfew, but when they started vandalising and scamming, the town Sherrif got involved, seizing all of the profits for the scams he could find and sending them off to a real charity. The boys got a slap on the wrist and let off, being told that if they did it again they'd face some more serious consequences.

Once Frank got involved with the boys he began regularly seeing the inside of Sherrif Shelham's office, once or twice seeing the bars of a prison cell for a night. At only seventeen, he couldn't be held for more than a night, but it was August and in October when he turned eighteen he'd have to serve full sentances. He kept going to school, despite the fact that the other boys had dropped out at the tender age of fifteen, he did want an education, even though he wasn't doing much to say such a thing at the time.

This is how things went in Carmarthen, people kept thier stories to themselves most of the time but if something big happened you could guarentee that the housewives would all be gossiping about it at eachother's houses. It carried on that way until a certain Way came and changed it all, a Gerard Way along with a certain Frank Iero, and here is how they became the talk of the town, looked down upon by some and up by others, how they broke the rules and questioned their faith, here is how they did it.


To be continued... ? Also, feel free to point out any mistakes, I'll probably go over this again tomorrow and correct it but it's late now and I'm going out tomorrow.

And! I forgot to add, that this is ded'd to [ profile] panictowel  if it carries on and s/he likes it. If not, I have another thing-y for her to like or not like instead, :D.

Date: 2009-04-09 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
aaaahhhh monvenin, you make my heart burn.
okay. i don't know where to begin. *longpause* okay, at the beginning. first i could see a movie start, camera gliding over the earth, zooming in on a small city. those words being spoken by a narrator, soon turned into stephen fry's voice, because this reminded me a bit of the hitchhiker's guide (not the plot, but the humour - and i love this.). then, with the cowboy, i had to think of a comic i once read on deviantart - with mcr as cowboys and stuff - and then - it just got better and better, even though it already was brilliant from the start. so would you please continue this?
and now i read the a/n and ... well, first of i feel honoured, thanks a lot. but what if i want the other thingy-for-me-to-like-or-dislike too (which i do)? do i have to say that this is shit? because i can lie if you want me to. hell, i'll kidnap brian and tell him, in a nice way, to visit you. with a lot. of. rope. *hint* yes. bribery.

continue this. i mean this.

Date: 2009-04-09 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh, you. This is exactly what I wanted you to say, with the movie feel and stuff! Stephen Fry should just... Stop being gay and marry me, please Steve?

The other thing I haven't finished writing yet, but I'll post it if you want to read it. I kinda want to scrap it, because it's not my best writing, but then I think back to when I wrote this and kinda wanted to stop working on it for a while so I could gather my thoughts, but, ta-da. Brian and rope? omgyespleasethankyou.

Will do pardner.

Date: 2009-04-09 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
yes, i'd like to read it - i like your style, so keep it coming.

for some weird reason, i want a cowboy hat now. oh well, this will go by

Date: 2009-04-10 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank youu! And, speaking of cowboy hats, don't you think Brian would look good in one?

Date: 2009-04-11 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
in just a cowboy hat? definitely.

Date: 2009-04-11 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I didn't mean in just a cowboy hat, but now you mention it.

... Wait a second, do you know anyone who writes Placebo slash. They should totally write that for my birthday, please, thank you.

Date: 2009-04-11 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

ah, placebo slash... i know someone who mentioned that once... gotta find them, when's your birthday/how much time do i have?

Date: 2009-04-11 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh, you've got ages yet, my birthday's in mid November, it'll give you time to find some Placebo slash coms and pursuade the people that write it to write for me.

No! Actually, can I have a monkey with a typewriter to dictate my memoirs to?

Date: 2009-04-11 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
sure, gimme a week with the monkey. until then - you can borrow my dog. he burps though when he feels weird, but don't let that stop you.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I laughed for like, ten minutes when I read that. Your dog sounds awesome, what's his/her name?

Date: 2009-04-11 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
her name is Mille. i was just trying to tell you something positive about that dog, but then i saw the slobber spot on my pants.
her ears are fluffy though, how about that?

Date: 2009-04-11 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
The comment space is getiing a little tight again so I'm going to comment again agfter this.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
have you ever considered writing placebo slash yourself or is this a territory you don't dare to go yet.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I only just started writing Frank/Bob so I don't think I'm going to go into a whole differnt fandom with my slash just yet, but I'd maybe do a MCR bandmember/Brian onshot or something for a special occasion, maybe even a oneshot with Sonny Moore in it because I happen to think he's particularly gorgeous.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Awh, she sounds so cute! I have a dog, her name is Angel, but she does not have fluffy ears. She's called Angel after Angel from Buffy The Vampire Slayer, because my mother is a nerddd.

Date: 2009-04-11 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
he, how cool is that ;-D

Date: 2009-04-11 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
mcr bandmember/brian sounds great, ouh yes - brian schechter or brian-cowboy-hat-molko? (doesn't matter actually, i'll read it)

just googled sonny, i have never heard that name before... so what are you into - him in fftl or do you prefer his solo career? (if i had asked you this without the first part, you'd never have known)

Date: 2009-04-11 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Brian 'Cowboy hat' Molko of course, I've never really thought about putting Brian. S in fics, I've only ever read about him in one and that was cause the writer didn't like Waycest and replaced Mikey with him.

I haven't even heard any of his music, I just know that he's tiny and he's hot.

Oh, plus, does anyone have any 'dog' fics around here? I kind of really really like them, in a very ashamed way, and I've only found two despite the fact that I've asked on MCShearts and looked for tags on delicious and everything.

Date: 2009-04-15 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
yeah, i saw your request - never read those though, any good? ('any good', you'll say, right? ;-))

tiny and hot. what more do we need.

Date: 2009-04-16 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yeah, they're good because people usually chose Bobby Bob-Bob (Don't even ask, ;D)to be the person that bosses the dog about, and I heart bossy Bobby Bob-Bob.

Maybe some swishy black hair and a nice ass? Oh, wait... xD

Date: 2009-04-19 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
harrr... drifting off... =)

dare i ask for a link for 'bossy bobby bob-bob'?

Date: 2009-04-19 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I would sing you to sleep, but, I don't think my singing is... soothing as such. More like what cats being brutally murdered would sound like.

I will link you to some bossy Bobby Bob-Bob when I get home, but I'm at my sister's atm and I don't really want her to see me linking graphic gay sex to people, plus I have shitloads of links bookmarked at home, so I'll link you up tomorrow.

Date: 2009-04-19 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
i can fall asleep with frank screaming into my ears. i think i'll manage ;-)

sweet, i'm looking forward to that tomorrow. (aah! monday! since when is it sunday? shit... i missed the weekend. somehow.)

Date: 2009-04-19 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I heart screaming Frankie. I'm just about to write a journal with a little bit of LM in it too.

I have absolutely nothing to do tomorrow. I am such a lazy ass slacker it's unreal.

Date: 2009-04-19 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
i'd put a heart in here now, if i knew how to do this. (good thing, i'm stalking your journal. wouldn't wanna miss that.)

ah me neither. and i'm probably more lazy than you are. i'd beat you there.

Date: 2009-04-19 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I wish my keyboard had little hearts, I was looking up xo and had to go all the way to wikipedia for the typeset O with a slash over it.

Beat me there? This does not sound very lazy, not very lazy at all.

Date: 2009-04-20 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
i don't know half of the shit people sometimes post.

you just wait for our movie-marathon, i'll make you bring me all the food.

Date: 2009-04-20 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I agree with you, listen to this chick I know's latest facebook update,


It's like another language. I swear to God that girl types with her ass, it makes me want to rip a hole in the space-time continuum so I can headbutt myself in the face in anger.

I so bet Vienna has better food than here. D'you know what Austria's national dish is? I heard ours was curry, O_o.

Date: 2009-04-20 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
uhm. exactly. right. that's the shit i'm talking about. huh?
oh jeez... i don't even wanna know what she's talking about.

ha, honestly, you're hilarious when you're angry.

i think it's the famous 'schnitzel'. and of course we have better food. ;-) everybody who travels to england complains about the food there. i know why. the last two days there, i was living on fruit. and i don't eat fruit.

Date: 2009-04-20 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
It's apparently some shit about her boyfriend or something... But I don't think I can be quoted on that. Because, seriously. Ass typing.

It just happens, I have a terrible case of word diarrhea.

What's 'schnitzel'? Really? Well, I guess it's just the culture. But what did you think of our muffins? Because if the English can do anything, they can make some fucking good muffins (Fo' serious, I just ate a box of them. I know I weigh like a kilo more now but it was totally worth it.) I like fruit, I'm a vegetarian too so I like vegetables an' all, they are my best friends.

Date: 2009-04-20 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
'dee daii mann'... yeah, some shit. you're right.

et voilà: schnitzel
i have nothing against your muffins. speaking of gluttony: my sister made chocolate-chocolate(yes, double-death-dose)muffins yesterday. i ate two, felt like dying and ate another, i love muffins.

Date: 2009-04-20 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
^ I'm getting my userpic on, wanna see?

I heart muffins-- wait! I♥ muffins! Yay.

Plus, your sister sounds amazing. Placebo fan? That would make her double amazing.

Date: 2009-04-20 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
oh my (i actually hihi'd). this is great.

ah, you nerd.

my sister got me into placebo. so yes. amazing.

Date: 2009-04-20 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I'll get Frank on you, but currently he's caged. ;DDD

I know, me and Karin had a nerd off. I won!

Hug her. please. Forever ;_;. Because although I have sisters, they have awful taste in muzak.

(Deleted the last post because I got the wrong icon, >_<)

Date: 2009-04-24 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
he probably deserved it. ;-)

congratulations! i actually have a stupid tshirt with i heart nerds printed on it. so i could have been your perfect nerd-supporter

speaking of... uh. nothing related really. but do you know this interview with mikey and ray where they talk briefly about fanfiction? (+ mikey is molesting the mic)... i have never seen this and wanted to give you the link for some reason. i'm not working today (working as in functioning.)

Date: 2009-04-24 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yes, naughty Frank. Getting all bitey.

You could have stood at the sidelines and cheerlead for me! I will alert you with a facebook event next time me and Karin nerd-off.

I watched it, "And, uh, well... Me and Gerard, were in... Relations." And Mikey is so molesting the mike. But yay for link sharing, anyways. Feel free to share more awesome interview links.

Date: 2009-04-28 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
okay, seriously, i can rarely decipher these stupid words i have to type in when i'm not logged in. gah, how annoying.

anyway, frank is naughty. yes. i believe in that.

that's what i'm saying, i should have pointed at my shirt and done some pantomime nerdy cheerleading. whouhou!

ah, i missed your icon.

Date: 2009-04-28 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
You could have had pom poms and everything, I'll email you of use the lottery money we won to 'copter to over to the next nerd off.

I missed Brian too. I heart you Bribri.

Date: 2009-04-28 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
apparently your nerd off wasn't the only thing i missed. what was that all about saint_sorrows and apologizing for 'childish journal entries'?

Date: 2009-04-28 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I don't know about that, any news as to what happened? I don't really know saint_sorrows, other than the fact that I think she likes something I wrote and her girlfriend is saint_viticus... And to whom would she have been been childish to?

Date: 2009-04-28 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
i have no idea, i just saw that she apologized to everyone for posting weird entries - which she deleted now... so i don't know, cause i wasn't online the last days to see them...
yes, i saw that she reviewed on your story, ohbob, that's so awesome. i must admit i stalk her, i love her stuff...

Date: 2009-04-28 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I stalk her too, but keep it hush... I think she must have a lot of lurkers though, being that cool and awesome.

Date: 2009-04-28 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
ha, who doesn't stalk her? ;-)
she's from manchester right? hm. now why do i know that? (if it's true)

Date: 2009-04-28 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I think that's it, yeah. And everyone probs stalks her, who wouldn't?


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